Some of this is well written, such as layout and language. Are these your contributions though Samad as your name only appears on one of the slides? Ensure all slides are labelled with a name. However there are proof reading issues and you could have looked inside the newspaper and done a close analysis of a story. Vanessa
film trailer pitch #1 trailer idea: a serial killer that is wearing a gas mask, a long jacket and a knife which he trying to find college students . first shot starts in a dark room because Halloween meets Friday the 13th . locations: dark room , forest, corridors props: long jacket, coat, normal clothing, knife, gas mask, number of shots: minimum 25 shots .
Some of this is well written, such as layout and language. Are these your contributions though Samad as your name only appears on one of the slides? Ensure all slides are labelled with a name. However there are proof reading issues and you could have looked inside the newspaper and done a close analysis of a story. Vanessa
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